
Please comment with any motion critiques you may have. I will be reanimating the first 5 beats of this piece this Christmas. I already have a lot of ideas thumbnailed out but any additional suggestions as to what other acting choices could use to break up that even pacing would be great. Thanks!

3 comments:
Cool work on the animation, looks great.
I love all of the exaggeration.
great stuff, i find that you are talented in animation.. for sure
the thing that bothered me was that i thought there was too much bending and follow through on the broom
it felt like a spagetti in stead of a hard stick he could smash the bug with
just my thought!
very nice animation, just stroling around
peace out!
Wally
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